原文
昨夜（3月4日）いつものように夜寝る前に湯たんぽにお湯を注いでから布団に運んでいたら、カバーが濡れていました。それで、湯たんぽをよく見たら、腐食して小さな穴が空いており、そこからお湯が漏れていました。耐用年数をネットで調べたら３～5年とありました。多分10年くらいは使っていたので、長持ちしたことになります。まだ、氷点下になる日もあるので、今日にでも買いに行こうと思っています。
私の英訳
As I was pouring hot water in a hot water bottle before going to bed last night, I noticed that its cover cloth was wet. On a closer look, I found a few minute holes made from corrosion, which caused leaking of water. Looking up on the internet, I learned that the lifetime of this hot water bottle is three to five years. I think I 've used my hot water bottle for about ten years. Mine lasted much longer than its supposed lifetime. I'm going to buy a new one today as it is expected to get below freezing point for some days to come.
DeepLの英訳
Last night as usual, I was pouring hot water into a hot-water bottle before going to bed and carrying it to the futon, when the cover was wet. I took a closer look at the hot-water bottle and found that it had corroded and had a small hole in it, through which hot water was leaking. I checked the service life on the Internet and found it to be 3 to 5 years. I had been using it for maybe 10 years, which means it had lasted a long time. I am going to buy a new one today because we still have days when it is below freezing.
ChatGPT の英訳
As I was filling my hot water bottle before going to bed last night, I noticed that its cover was wet. Upon closer inspection, I found several small holes caused by corrosion, which led to water leaking out. After researching online, I discovered that the typical lifespan of a hot water bottle is three to five years. I believe I've been using mine for about ten years. It has lasted much longer than expected. Considering that the temperature is expected to drop below freezing in the coming days, I plan to buy a new one today.
Copilot の英訳
Last night, as I poured boiling water into my trusty hot water bottle before settling into bed, I noticed something amiss. The cover cloth felt damp, and upon closer inspection, I discovered tiny holes—corrosion’s handiwork—causing water to leak out. It was as if my faithful companion was whispering, “It’s time for retirement.”Curious about the lifespan of hot water bottles, I turned to the internet. According to my research, these cozy companions typically last between three to five years. Well, mine had been in service for a whopping ten years! Clearly, it had outlasted its supposed expiration date.With winter’s icy grip approaching, I’ve decided it’s time to bid farewell to my battle-worn hot water bottle. Today, I embark on a quest to find a new one—one that will keep me snug during those freezing nights ahead.
Copilotの英訳はやや情緒的な感じがしますね。
